lolz... funny lol
so, um, as your use name is Snooglebum, i'm going to assume this was a serious track, and so i will take it as seriously as possible (lol...)
it's hollow. that means you need to add some sort of bass into the mix. also, something rhythm-like would help. like an ARP? or a euro gate? i'm not sure for this kid of music... but yeah. and make it actually move... feels like your song is sitting in one place because it's lazy lol...
It's not supposed to be any sort of dance song or a song with a heavy bass, it's a lullaby, it's supposed to be gentle and soothing.
Thanks for the review!
well done!
i'll be watching this track... and if you need anything from your humble apprentice feel free to ask...
but i will NOT sing lol... not yet. i need to be alone to sing this one lol...
very nice lyrics though =)
lol thanks.. and "humble apprentice" ?!? NICE.. xD
and i like the story of the lyricks too... just need to fix some of the ryhms.. n u definatly need to be alone for this one xD (some of the lyicks are maybe to be yelled or screamed the rockish style lol)
well done!
i loved how you did the percussion, your ending was definitely unexpected, but it worked just fine =). the song is enjoyable, and will most definitely make it to my iPod, good job!
by the way, it that Toxic Biohazard's iron piano at the end? if your going to use something as powerful as ToXBio, then try making some of your own synths, get creative =)
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I actually did make all my synths I use mostly sytrus and 3xocs. I really appreciate you help btw. Thx again.
exilarating
really a truly great piece of art... if only it wasn't digital. if you rented a real grand and a drum set and an orchestra ($3,000 for a day's rental, ugh. xD) and a recording hall. then this would be an awesome song.
by the way, why haven't you posted the newer version? it would probably get better scores... it's more epic than this one =)
lol thanks m8. i did have an erly vertion of the new vertion up here a while ago. but the score was suckky n ppl dident visit it. so took it down. but i might get the newest one up here later on =P i like this vertion too tho. it have another feal to it n is more relaxed.
very interesting.
have you seen the movie "Up"? this sounds like exactly the song that would play in one of the sadder scene in that movie. not rainy though. naw.
-1: not what it was titled to be
-1: instrument could be much better, and a real violin would do you wonders...
very good, just get better synths and write a little more variation
oh, and a tremolo (guitar effect, not referring to a whammy bar) on your rhythm instrument there
Haha yeah i've seen that movie. Good idea :O I was making it during a thunderstorm so thats what set the mood, but it would also make a great addition to a sad scene aswell :)
I'm working on getting improved synths, just lacking the monies :C
Glad you enjoyed it :)
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