inferno?
great track here, man. but there are a few things:
[+] enjoyable, rigid, and well- mastered, with cool fx.
[-] i would have liked some creative chord changes, instead of the basic techno/dance stuff. or at least some crazy analog keyboard soloing.
other than that, 9/10-5/5
listened in heaven
great song, great listen, great instrumentalists, great vocalist, great writing.
5/5
10/10
don't change anything... this is how music is meant to be.
i'd be honored if you would review/criticize my newest track: "that's what we get"
thanx for your vote and your kind words,
i gave you some greetings to your song :)))))))))))
not a bad song
but sorry, this wouldn't be blues even if hell freezed over.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iNrFu_
p_ajY&feature=player_embedded <blues
but about your song, i'm not quite sure what style it would fit under. experimental, maybe? it wouldn't be out of place in general rock. that covers alternative.
try stepping back from your mic and singing louder. if that makes your voice too quiet, even if your singing as loud as you can, put a compressor on it. other than that, it's not bad. cept' your drums. they stink because they're stanky!!
(haha, just try to do a more steady beat =P)
4/5 8/10 \m/
lol :D
i guess i shouldve posted in general rock then
i think its just my mic though. i bought it for 20 dollars.
when i crank up the volume it crackles :*(
and if i hook it up to my fx box it just sounds like crap
so right now i have it running through a clean amp.
my drums suck i admit it! im bad at them haha
thanks for the review bro!
very nice
ahaha, sage16, i got a red fender too. a strat kid. great sounds like nobody's mother.
and at shadow617 and his song, very very good. i loved how you used the acoustic guitar a lot. the rhythms are impeccable and it left me feeling like all my blues have gone home. that's how you do it.
5/5 10/10
and i'd be honored for you to criticize, or review my newest blues track, "That's what we get"
from one great musician to another, thanks man. appreciate it much.
nice
nice drum machine. but mine is better =) and much faster to work with, i'd have that done in 30 mins where you spent 3 hours haha. try recording drums and then guitar over it, that may help you out. i like your riffs much btw. even though i'm not much of a metal kid myself. and sorry about the zero-bombers. i gave you a 5 =)
if you want help whenever you write a serious song, feel free to message me =)
5/5, 9/10 \m/
please return the favor on my new song: "that's what we get"
Right on man I will definitely return the favour. I'm not sure what drum machine you use, but I use EZ Drummer + Drumkit From Hell... I'm fairly new to it and made all the beats myself, didn't use any presets, so it took me a while to get the kinks figured out.
Thanks for the vote! And you should definitely PM me what you use for drums :D
chaotic...
but good. i'm not sure weather or not the guitar sounds real to me. i don't think so, but i don't know. either way, it's well written. i'm not a huge fan of your drums either, but they're at least not annoying. very creepy later on. also, later on, teh guitar sounds much more fake. sorry, but IMO guitar is one of the main instruments that should not be samples or synth. well, to my iPod! heehee. (that's a compliment coming from me =P)
5/5 8/10
very well written. if only it equally well recorded real instruments.
i'd be glad to record the guitar and bass parts for you if you'd like, message me =P
please return the favor with my new song: that's what we get.
(also a great example of my guitar skill)
Its all real guitar. Just edited at the points like the scratch sound. and there are some really heavy effect / compressors on the guitar soud as well witch makes it sound fake towards the end but i thought it fit well with the song. Also, thanks for the review! :D please check out my other songs. and give me some feed back if you don't mind.
i like it
lyrics are good, but put a compressor on the vocals and see what that does for you. also, try working on timing, and leads and rhythms that complement each other.
i'd like to hear the bass, if it's there, and some drums would be nice. the addicting drums plugin demo is free, and the only thing they took away was your ride symbol and toms and you can use it if you're using most host programs.
pretty good, and good job keeping the same general idea throughout the song. i know alot of people fail to do that. also, a solo at the end could be cool.
5/5, 8/10.
please return the favor on my new song: that's what we get
kthx, bye, and good luck!
Thx :)
Ye i messed up with the editing a bit :/ didn't have enought time perfecting the sound from the mixer board. And i totally forgot about compressors! The bass is there but the volume seems to be pretty low. I can hear it fine but others can't. Must be because i have some different setings on my sound card. But thx for a great review :) I will make another version and prefect the song ^^
yeah, you definitely captured the feeling
good job, mate. keep this up and you have a bright future my friend ^^
Thank you^^
I'm getting a little better with every song :]
i agree
wow, this is really good. i usually protest monotone vocals... but this is really frisking good. screw people who 0 bomb this, this is really good. the lyrics were exceptionally good, i can relate to them and they are easy to listen to. the music is well done and mastered flawlessly. this is too well done for anyone to rate this lower than 4, i'm not kidding.
5/5
10/10
thank you, im glad you thought it was good :)
impressive!
i really enjoyed the sounds here... i'm going to have to take a look at milkytracker myself lol.. i loved the bass and the chords, and it was smooth, flowing, and altogether well made.... i'm going to have to look into those sounds, haha, i've been searching for something kinda like that =)
overall, pretty good, make it much longer... and maybe add some vocals (japanese, maybe?) if you want help with vocals, though, i'll be glad to help =)
Well, the kick and the snare samples were from a 90's Radix module, and the other samples were drawn by me in milkytracker (milkytracker has a really handy sample editor).
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