lolz... funny lol
so, um, as your use name is Snooglebum, i'm going to assume this was a serious track, and so i will take it as seriously as possible (lol...)
it's hollow. that means you need to add some sort of bass into the mix. also, something rhythm-like would help. like an ARP? or a euro gate? i'm not sure for this kid of music... but yeah. and make it actually move... feels like your song is sitting in one place because it's lazy lol...