not a bad song
but sorry, this wouldn't be blues even if hell freezed over.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iNrFu_
p_ajY&feature=player_embedded <blues
but about your song, i'm not quite sure what style it would fit under. experimental, maybe? it wouldn't be out of place in general rock. that covers alternative.
try stepping back from your mic and singing louder. if that makes your voice too quiet, even if your singing as loud as you can, put a compressor on it. other than that, it's not bad. cept' your drums. they stink because they're stanky!!
(haha, just try to do a more steady beat =P)
4/5 8/10 \m/