well done!
i loved how you did the percussion, your ending was definitely unexpected, but it worked just fine =). the song is enjoyable, and will most definitely make it to my iPod, good job!
by the way, it that Toxic Biohazard's iron piano at the end? if your going to use something as powerful as ToXBio, then try making some of your own synths, get creative =)
8/10
4/5
I actually did make all my synths I use mostly sytrus and 3xocs. I really appreciate you help btw. Thx again.
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really a truly great piece of art... if only it wasn't digital. if you rented a real grand and a drum set and an orchestra ($3,000 for a day's rental, ugh. xD) and a recording hall. then this would be an awesome song.
by the way, why haven't you posted the newer version? it would probably get better scores... it's more epic than this one =)
lol thanks m8. i did have an erly vertion of the new vertion up here a while ago. but the score was suckky n ppl dident visit it. so took it down. but i might get the newest one up here later on =P i like this vertion too tho. it have another feal to it n is more relaxed.
very interesting.
have you seen the movie "Up"? this sounds like exactly the song that would play in one of the sadder scene in that movie. not rainy though. naw.
-1: not what it was titled to be
-1: instrument could be much better, and a real violin would do you wonders...
very good, just get better synths and write a little more variation
oh, and a tremolo (guitar effect, not referring to a whammy bar) on your rhythm instrument there
Haha yeah i've seen that movie. Good idea :O I was making it during a thunderstorm so thats what set the mood, but it would also make a great addition to a sad scene aswell :)
I'm working on getting improved synths, just lacking the monies :C
Glad you enjoyed it :)
Touching!
7. this would be a ten if it was on writing music, but it isn't, sadly.
why did you lose 3 points?
-1: moments where your voice's intonation is questionable
-1: sound quality... your song is beautiful, but it hurts my sensitive ears =(
-1: [1:32-X] that really fast sing/talk/rap kills the mood for me
keep on truckin'!
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